वतन

वतन पे है नजर जिसकी बुरी उसको मिटा देगें,,,
सबक ऐसा सिखा देगें कि धड से सर उडा देगें।।

जहाँ पानी बहाना है वहां पर खून देगें हम,,,
वतन से प्यार कितना है जहाँ को हम दिखा देगें।।

हजारो साल काटे हैं गुलामों की तरह हमने,,,
नहीं अब और सहना हैं ये दुनिया को बता देगें।।

कसम है उन शहीदों की लुटा दी जान सरहद पे,,,
उसी रस्ते चलेंगे और अपना सर कटा देगें।।

हमारे गाँव का बच्चा नहीं है कम किसी से भी,,,
जहाँ भी पावं रख देगें वहां धरती हिला देगें।।

समन्दर कांप जाएगा ये दरिया सूख जाएगा,,,
कि ऐसी आग भर देगें सभी मुर्दे जगा देगें।।

मेरा हर शब्द अगांरा मेरा हर लफ्ज़ है बिजली,,,
जहाँ दुश्मन दिखा हमको ‘लकी’ उसको जला देगें।।

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लगातार अपडेट रहने के लिए सावन से फ़ेसबुक, ट्विटर, इन्स्टाग्राम, पिन्टरेस्ट पर जुड़े| 

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61 Comments

  1. Sonu Prajapati - January 26, 2018, 9:26 pm

    Very nice jagdish bhai

  2. S Lokindra - January 26, 2018, 6:21 pm

    Great
    Jai hind jai bharat

  3. Anuj Gautam - January 26, 2018, 5:31 pm

    Vadiya likha h aapne

  4. Anil Kumar - January 26, 2018, 5:12 pm

    GOOD LUCY NIMESH BHAI

  5. Pradeep Singh - January 26, 2018, 4:51 pm

    like it.

  6. Subh Sharma - January 26, 2018, 4:35 pm

    Best poem

  7. Lokeshhimansu Kumar - January 26, 2018, 4:32 pm

    Bahtreen

  8. Mohit Kumar - January 26, 2018, 4:30 pm

    Badiya ji

  9. Krishan Kumar - January 26, 2018, 4:27 pm

    Nice

  10. Sukhdev Singh - January 26, 2018, 4:24 pm

    Nice

  11. Vinod Dave - January 26, 2018, 4:17 pm

    जय हिंद

  12. Anil Kumar - January 26, 2018, 4:13 pm

    Best

  13. Kamal Kamal - January 26, 2018, 4:07 pm

    Nice

  14. वतन - Saavan - January 26, 2018, 3:34 pm

    […] वतन […]

  15. Viraj Singh - January 26, 2018, 2:51 pm

    Bahut bahut badya h Ji apki ye kavita ,,

    Jai Hind

  16. Viraj Singh - January 26, 2018, 2:50 pm

    B

    Aao Jhuk K Salam Karein Unko
    Jinke Hisse Me Ye Mukam Aata Hai,
    Khushnaseeb Hota Hai Wo Khoon
    Jo Desh Ke Kaam Aata Hai
    Happy 26 January

  17. Viraj Singh - January 26, 2018, 2:49 pm

    Very nice,, Jai hind

  18. Yogesh Kumar - January 26, 2018, 2:39 pm

    Very nice and gud job

  19. Babita Verma - January 26, 2018, 2:22 pm

    Bahut sundar

  20. Lalit K - January 26, 2018, 2:00 pm

    Achhi h ji bahtreen

  21. Anuj Prajapati - January 26, 2018, 1:56 pm

    Achhi h ji

  22. Raaj Raajthakur - January 26, 2018, 1:50 pm

    Bahtreeeen h

  23. Manoj Kumar - January 26, 2018, 1:44 pm

    Babut bah treen

  24. Yash Pal Singh - January 26, 2018, 1:41 pm

    Umda jnab

  25. Rakesh Kumar - January 26, 2018, 1:33 pm

    Bahut badiya

  26. Gaurav Sharma - January 26, 2018, 12:24 pm

    Nice poem

  27. Manisha Nema - January 26, 2018, 12:04 pm

    वाह जी ..खूब

  28. Shweta Dixit - January 26, 2018, 11:24 am

    Beautiful

  29. Sankalp Gupta - January 26, 2018, 11:20 am

    Very good ghazal lucky nim esher ji

  30. Babita Verma - January 26, 2018, 11:14 am

    Very good ghazal

  31. Amol Ratan - January 26, 2018, 11:05 am

    Bhut achchhe lucky bhai

  32. Sanjog Yadav - January 26, 2018, 10:51 am

    Bhut shi

  33. Suraj Kumar - January 26, 2018, 10:50 am

    Nice

  34. 198126947436688 - January 26, 2018, 10:49 am

    जय हिंद जय भारत। बहुत सुंदर रचना

  35. 198126947436688 - January 26, 2018, 10:48 am

    वाह वाह बहुत खूब। देश प्रेम ……….

  36. Mamta Dahiya - January 26, 2018, 10:36 am

    Nice poem

  37. kumar.abhinav61 - January 26, 2018, 9:31 am

    बढ़िया

  38. Sonu Gautam - January 25, 2018, 11:47 pm

    Bhut khoob

  39. Sonu Gautam - January 25, 2018, 11:46 pm

    Nice ati sunder lucki g.gazal

  40. Pradeep Sumanakshar - January 25, 2018, 11:46 pm

    वाह देशप्रेम के जज्बे से भरी बेहतरीन रचना।

  41. Dushyant Yadav - January 25, 2018, 11:17 pm

    बेहतरीन लाजवाब

  42. Yashwant Kumar - January 25, 2018, 11:10 pm

    ((हमारे गाँव का बच्चा नहीं है कम किसी से भी,,,
    जहाँ भी पावं रख देगें वहां धरती हिला देगें।।))
    क्या गजब लिखे है सर

  43. Priyanka Soni - January 25, 2018, 10:53 pm

    बहुत अच्छी रचना 👌

  44. 2034194000153460 - January 25, 2018, 9:32 pm

    बहुत ही बढिया वाहहहहह जय हिंद

  45. Deepshikha Sharma - January 25, 2018, 9:06 pm

    Nice poem

  46. Shashi Vihaan - January 25, 2018, 8:34 pm

    Very nice

  47. Raj Bansal - January 25, 2018, 8:29 pm

    bahut hi umda Likha lucky bhai aise hi like rahoge to vo din door nhi jab duniya tumahri kalam ki taqat ko pahchan jayegi. Wah bhai Wah Ati sunder

  48. Chitra Bhardwaj - January 25, 2018, 8:24 pm

    Waaaaaaah bahut shandaar

  49. rana.chitra - January 25, 2018, 8:20 pm

    वीर रस की अच्छी रचना।

  50. Deepak Kumar - January 25, 2018, 8:13 pm

    Bahut sundar👌

  51. Salim Naikwadi - January 25, 2018, 8:03 pm

    Waaaaaahhh bahut khub

  52. Dharmendra Kumar Nagar - January 25, 2018, 7:15 pm

    बहुत उम्दा

  53. Monu Sain - January 25, 2018, 6:57 pm

    Bahut badiya sir

  54. Deepshikha Sharma - January 25, 2018, 6:54 pm

    Bahut badia…keep it up…jai hind

  55. Amit Kumar - January 25, 2018, 6:51 pm

    Behtreen sir

  56. Akhtar Gorakhpuri - January 25, 2018, 6:51 pm

    बहुत उम्दा वाह वाह वाह

  57. manoj05deshmukh - January 25, 2018, 6:50 pm

    Wow bahut badhiya sir

  58. Ranjeetsingh Tanha - January 25, 2018, 6:42 pm

    Nice ghazal

  59. Anuj Gautam - January 25, 2018, 6:41 pm

    Bahut vadiya likha h..
    Jai hind Jai bharat

  60. Vivek Pandit - January 25, 2018, 6:20 pm

    jai hind

  61. Dharmendra Kumar Nagar - January 25, 2018, 5:02 pm

    क्या बात लिख डाली है
    बहुत सटीक

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