वतन

वतन पे है नजर जिसकी बुरी उसको मिटा देगें,,,
सबक ऐसा सिखा देगें कि धड से सर उडा देगें।।

जहाँ पानी बहाना है वहां पर खून देगें हम,,,
वतन से प्यार कितना है जहाँ को हम दिखा देगें।।

हजारो साल काटे हैं गुलामों की तरह हमने,,,
नहीं अब और सहना हैं ये दुनिया को बता देगें।।

कसम है उन शहीदों की लुटा दी जान सरहद पे,,,
उसी रस्ते चलेंगे और अपना सर कटा देगें।।

हमारे गाँव का बच्चा नहीं है कम किसी से भी,,,
जहाँ भी पावं रख देगें वहां धरती हिला देगें।।

समन्दर कांप जाएगा ये दरिया सूख जाएगा,,,
कि ऐसी आग भर देगें सभी मुर्दे जगा देगें।।

मेरा हर शब्द अगांरा मेरा हर लफ्ज़ है बिजली,,,
जहाँ दुश्मन दिखा हमको ‘लकी’ उसको जला देगें।।

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लगातार अपडेट रहने के लिए सावन से फ़ेसबुक, ट्विटर, इन्स्टाग्राम, पिन्टरेस्ट पर जुड़े| 

यदि आपको सावन पर किसी भी प्रकार की समस्या आती है तो हमें हमारे फ़ेसबुक पेज पर सूचित करें|

61 Comments

  1. Dharmendra Kumar Nagar - January 25, 2018, 5:02 pm

    क्या बात लिख डाली है
    बहुत सटीक

  2. Vivek Pandit - January 25, 2018, 6:20 pm

    jai hind

  3. Anuj Gautam - January 25, 2018, 6:41 pm

    Bahut vadiya likha h..
    Jai hind Jai bharat

  4. Ranjeetsingh Tanha - January 25, 2018, 6:42 pm

    Nice ghazal

  5. manoj05deshmukh - January 25, 2018, 6:50 pm

    Wow bahut badhiya sir

  6. Akhtar Gorakhpuri - January 25, 2018, 6:51 pm

    बहुत उम्दा वाह वाह वाह

  7. Amit Kumar - January 25, 2018, 6:51 pm

    Behtreen sir

  8. Deepshikha Sharma - January 25, 2018, 6:54 pm

    Bahut badia…keep it up…jai hind

  9. Monu Sain - January 25, 2018, 6:57 pm

    Bahut badiya sir

  10. Dharmendra Kumar Nagar - January 25, 2018, 7:15 pm

    बहुत उम्दा

  11. Salim Naikwadi - January 25, 2018, 8:03 pm

    Waaaaaahhh bahut khub

  12. Deepak Kumar - January 25, 2018, 8:13 pm

    Bahut sundar👌

  13. rana.chitra - January 25, 2018, 8:20 pm

    वीर रस की अच्छी रचना।

  14. Chitra Bhardwaj - January 25, 2018, 8:24 pm

    Waaaaaaah bahut shandaar

  15. Raj Bansal - January 25, 2018, 8:29 pm

    bahut hi umda Likha lucky bhai aise hi like rahoge to vo din door nhi jab duniya tumahri kalam ki taqat ko pahchan jayegi. Wah bhai Wah Ati sunder

  16. Shashi Vihaan - January 25, 2018, 8:34 pm

    Very nice

  17. Deepshikha Sharma - January 25, 2018, 9:06 pm

    Nice poem

  18. 2034194000153460 - January 25, 2018, 9:32 pm

    बहुत ही बढिया वाहहहहह जय हिंद

  19. Priyanka Soni - January 25, 2018, 10:53 pm

    बहुत अच्छी रचना 👌

  20. Yashwant Kumar - January 25, 2018, 11:10 pm

    ((हमारे गाँव का बच्चा नहीं है कम किसी से भी,,,
    जहाँ भी पावं रख देगें वहां धरती हिला देगें।।))
    क्या गजब लिखे है सर

  21. Dushyant Yadav - January 25, 2018, 11:17 pm

    बेहतरीन लाजवाब

  22. Pradeep Sumanakshar - January 25, 2018, 11:46 pm

    वाह देशप्रेम के जज्बे से भरी बेहतरीन रचना।

  23. Sonu Gautam - January 25, 2018, 11:46 pm

    Nice ati sunder lucki g.gazal

  24. Sonu Gautam - January 25, 2018, 11:47 pm

    Bhut khoob

  25. kumar.abhinav61 - January 26, 2018, 9:31 am

    बढ़िया

  26. Mamta Dahiya - January 26, 2018, 10:36 am

    Nice poem

  27. 198126947436688 - January 26, 2018, 10:48 am

    वाह वाह बहुत खूब। देश प्रेम ……….

  28. 198126947436688 - January 26, 2018, 10:49 am

    जय हिंद जय भारत। बहुत सुंदर रचना

  29. Suraj Kumar - January 26, 2018, 10:50 am

    Nice

  30. Sanjog Yadav - January 26, 2018, 10:51 am

    Bhut shi

  31. Amol Ratan - January 26, 2018, 11:05 am

    Bhut achchhe lucky bhai

  32. Babita Verma - January 26, 2018, 11:14 am

    Very good ghazal

  33. Sankalp Gupta - January 26, 2018, 11:20 am

    Very good ghazal lucky nim esher ji

  34. Shweta Dixit - January 26, 2018, 11:24 am

    Beautiful

  35. Manisha Nema - January 26, 2018, 12:04 pm

    वाह जी ..खूब

  36. Gaurav Sharma - January 26, 2018, 12:24 pm

    Nice poem

  37. Rakesh Kumar - January 26, 2018, 1:33 pm

    Bahut badiya

  38. Yash Pal Singh - January 26, 2018, 1:41 pm

    Umda jnab

  39. Manoj Kumar - January 26, 2018, 1:44 pm

    Babut bah treen

  40. Raaj Raajthakur - January 26, 2018, 1:50 pm

    Bahtreeeen h

  41. Anuj Prajapati - January 26, 2018, 1:56 pm

    Achhi h ji

  42. Lalit K - January 26, 2018, 2:00 pm

    Achhi h ji bahtreen

  43. Babita Verma - January 26, 2018, 2:22 pm

    Bahut sundar

  44. Yogesh Kumar - January 26, 2018, 2:39 pm

    Very nice and gud job

  45. Viraj Singh - January 26, 2018, 2:49 pm

    Very nice,, Jai hind

  46. Viraj Singh - January 26, 2018, 2:50 pm

    B

    Aao Jhuk K Salam Karein Unko
    Jinke Hisse Me Ye Mukam Aata Hai,
    Khushnaseeb Hota Hai Wo Khoon
    Jo Desh Ke Kaam Aata Hai
    Happy 26 January

  47. Viraj Singh - January 26, 2018, 2:51 pm

    Bahut bahut badya h Ji apki ye kavita ,,

    Jai Hind

  48. वतन - Saavan - January 26, 2018, 3:34 pm

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  49. Kamal Kamal - January 26, 2018, 4:07 pm

    Nice

  50. Anil Kumar - January 26, 2018, 4:13 pm

    Best

  51. Vinod Dave - January 26, 2018, 4:17 pm

    जय हिंद

  52. Sukhdev Singh - January 26, 2018, 4:24 pm

    Nice

  53. Krishan Kumar - January 26, 2018, 4:27 pm

    Nice

  54. Mohit Kumar - January 26, 2018, 4:30 pm

    Badiya ji

  55. Lokeshhimansu Kumar - January 26, 2018, 4:32 pm

    Bahtreen

  56. Subh Sharma - January 26, 2018, 4:35 pm

    Best poem

  57. Pradeep Singh - January 26, 2018, 4:51 pm

    like it.

  58. Anil Kumar - January 26, 2018, 5:12 pm

    GOOD LUCY NIMESH BHAI

  59. Anuj Gautam - January 26, 2018, 5:31 pm

    Vadiya likha h aapne

  60. S Lokindra - January 26, 2018, 6:21 pm

    Great
    Jai hind jai bharat

  61. Sonu Prajapati - January 26, 2018, 9:26 pm

    Very nice jagdish bhai

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